tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-335395641523090931.post3986038539151653716..comments2011-10-09T01:42:04.183-07:00Comments on Randomness From My Room: First attempt at freewritingSarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07388818905563851320noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-335395641523090931.post-87416550754426548562011-10-09T01:42:04.183-07:002011-10-09T01:42:04.183-07:00Love the soap description, it took me straight bac...Love the soap description, it took me straight back to my own Grandma's kitchen. Good luck with the course and well done on setting up the blog; I'm trying to do the same.Frances Canninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04612082662072423365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-335395641523090931.post-73447973318280615752011-10-09T00:03:36.361-07:002011-10-09T00:03:36.361-07:00Thanks Neil, I agree with you. It's not a ...Thanks Neil, I agree with you. It's not a 'proper' freewrite. I read your piece on freewriting and it's most helpful (thank you). I'll give it another go. I'm not offended at all ~ it's just what I need to get me going in the right direction. Thanks muchly!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388818905563851320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-335395641523090931.post-69673921970453054822011-10-08T09:03:06.301-07:002011-10-08T09:03:06.301-07:00Hi Sarah!
This is a nice description of you nan...Hi Sarah!<br />This is a nice description of you nan's kitchen and some nice detail about her always sighing. It's not unfortunately a freewrite though as it's just staying on the one topic. I have been informed by my tutor that a 'proper' freewrite quickly slips the boundaries of the prompt and seemingly jumps from random thought to random thought faster than you can consciously edit. <br /><br />I do like this piece of writing however, and please don't be offended by my criticism, as I am just trying to help you get the technique sorted out! My blog has a piece on writing freewrites and a short freewrite is on there also that might help you see my point :-) <br /><br />I love the images that you do have on here though! As I said, nice description of your nan's kitchen!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01014681958132201978noreply@blogger.com